I am a Year 7 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 5 and my teacher is Mr Minton.
Great poem Sione, your brother seems very sweet and it seems like you two have a great relationship. You have made great use of metaphors, I especially like your initial sentence "My brother a lone wolf vicious". Keep up the good work Sione!
Nice poem Sione, you have sure described your brother well using great metaphors.Keep up the good work.
What a really nice poem Sione. You're brother seems like a really nice guy.Keep up the good work.
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Great poem Sione, your brother seems very sweet and it seems like you two have a great relationship. You have made great use of metaphors, I especially like your initial sentence "My brother a lone wolf vicious". Keep up the good work Sione!
Nice poem Sione, you have sure described your brother well using great metaphors.
Keep up the good work.
What a really nice poem Sione. You're brother seems like a really nice guy.
Keep up the good work.
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